Tuesday, November 2, 2010

New Beginnings

The beauty of God's creation is amazing! I've decided to rewrite one of my stories to submit as an inspirational. Even as I was writing it originally, I wanted to let God lead but I fought to do it my way. Well it was rejected I'm happy to say because now it can be what He wants me to write, not what I was writing to suit someone else. ...a few small changes and it will be ready to submit.

Pray that this time I get it right!

Here's a little peek at Daffodils:

Lukas watched Margaret step around him…his Megs. God, he wanted to hold her, to wrap her in his arms and cry with her for all she had lost, for all they had lost. She looked brittle, like fine crystal that might shatter with too much pressure. Dear Lord, give her the strength to get through this. Please take away this burden of grief she carries. It’s gone on long enough, Lord. Help me to be the friend I ought to be, and if it’s your will Lord, please heal the pain I caused her so long ago.


6 comments:

  1. Donna, I'm looking forward to reading this story.
    As always I'm praying for you :)

    Cindy

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  2. Donna,
    I'm glad your open to God's leading for this WIP. Hope it comes together beautifully for you!

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  3. Thanks ladies! I'm really looking forward to the final polish on this one!

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  4. It sounds like it'll be great, Donna - and I'm so glad you decided to let God do the leading! :)

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  5. Blessings to you all! Thanks for the support!

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